Poem Analysis - Dream Within a Dream by Edgar Allan Poe

Dream Within a Dream

Take this kiss upon the brow!
And, in parting from you now,
Thus much let me avow-
You are not wrong, who deem
That my days have been a dream;
Yet if hope has flown away
In a night, or in a day,
In a vision, or in none,
Is it therefore the less gone?
All that we see or seem
Is but a dream within a dream.

I stand amid the roar
Of a surf-tormented shore,
And I hold within my hand
Grains of the golden sand-
How few! yet how they creep
Through my fingers to the deep,
While I weep- while I weep!
O God! can I not grasp
Them with a tighter clasp?
O God! can I not save
One from the pitiless wave?
Is all that we see or seem
But a dream within a dream? 

- Edgar Allan Poe

Analysis     

               

                Though it is a somewhat short poem, there are still several examples of poetic devices being used in the poem. In the 6th lines of stanza 1, it says "Yet if hope has flown away". That is a use of personification that puts the ability to fly to the emotion of hope. It refers to the loss of hope in life, as this was written towards the end of Poe's life, and he was writing this as almost a goodbye to his loved ones. In the second stanza, there is repetition in two cases. First is when it says "While I weep- while I weep!", and the second is the repetition of "O God!" in two lines. The use of repetition really brings the lines to the front of the mind, causing the readers to take note of the lines and try to take in their meaning. In the second last line there is alliteration between the words "see" and "seem". Alliteration is a way to cause the poem to flow smoothly, and to make the line it appears in seem to have a heavier weighting when being read, causing readers to take notice of it.

                The first line that stands out to the eye of the reader is "You are not wrong, who deem That my days have been a dream;".  This line is Poe saying that he has spent much of his time in daydreams, wondering about life and everything around him. He could also be referring to the fact that he spent his time thinking of fantasy to get away from the reality of his own life. The second line which stands out is "Yet if hope has flown away In a night, or in a day, In a vision, or in none, Is it therefore the less gone?" This line is Poe basically asking whether loss of hope in dreams is any different than the loss of it in the real world, and whether people can really distinguish between them or not. Poe seems to be of the opinion that dreams and reality are not so much disconnected as they were thought, and that one is as powerful as the other. The third stand-out line is the last, "Is all that we see or seem But a dream within a dream?" This is the summation of the poem itself, from Poe saying goodbye to his lover, to him standing on a beach contemplating life, he wonders whether or not life and dreams are all that different, and whether or not people can really differentiate, and whether or not we really are all so detached from life that all is naught but a dream itself.

-Rory O'Loghlin

Introduction to Poetry Analysis: “Shake the Dust” by Anis Mojgani

Introduction to Poetry Analysis

“Shake the Dust” by Anis Mojgani

The poet Anis Mojgani uses a lot of very descriptive language in his poem “Shake the Dust” to convey an image to the people listening or reading. He also uses many of the poetic devices that we have been taught in school to make his poem have a more profound effect on the people experiencing it. The first example of such a device is one that repeats several times throughout the poem, utilizing the device of repetition. Whenever the phrase “Shake the dust” appears in the poem, it is almost a pause between stanzas, causing the audience to really take in what they had just heard and think about what he was saying. The term itself, at least in my opinion, is also a metaphor. “Shake the dust” could mean to shake up your life, and not to let it settle, meaning not to let your life settle into some monotonous groove that seems to present itself to you. People must shake the dust of their life to find new opportunities and experiences that would not just come to them; they have to seek them out. The second device that I would point out is an allusion to two people that exist in real life. He references Mick Jagger and Tina Turner, which could possibly represent the one song that they sang together on, which was “Gimme Shelter” by the Rolling Stones. The song is about war and horrendous crimes, and partially drugs as well. When Mojgani references the two people, he could be meaning that it’s for the people who have lived through what that song talks about. The third such device is a metaphor that is towards the end of the poem. When Mojgani says “so when the world knocks at your front door / clutch the knob and open on up”, he is using the world knocking at the door as a metaphor for when things seem to be too intense to handle, like too much is piled on top and you feel like you just can’t take it, that you just have to accept it with open arms and confront it or else you’ll never become the person that you’re meant to be and you’ll be stuck in whatever rut you’re in until the day you die.

The first line that I would cite to express the poem’s thematic statement is “do not let a moment go by that doesn’t remind you that your heart beats 900 times a day”. Though the heart doesn’t actually beat once every two minutes, this line strikes me as one of the ones that stick in the mind even after the poem is finished. It means to never forget that you’re alive, and that your body is even reminding you that you’re living about 0.625 times per minute (realistically about 70). It is a reminder to never let that “dust” settle and to continue to live life to the fullest and not let stereotypes or anything pin you down to one specific thing. The second line that I would cite is “so grab the world by its clothespins and shake it out again and again”. In this line Mojgani is referring to the world in terms of something like a rug that must be shaken out to get the dust out. This basically summarizes the point of the poem, because he is saying to not let your life settle into some form that doesn’t satisfy you, no matter who you are, you can still shake up your life and re-invent yourself to become whoever or whatever you want to be. The last line that I would cite is “for those families who will never be like the cleavers / with perfectly made dinners and sons like Wally and the beaver”. This line summarizes for whom this poem is being told. Mojgani spends the entire poem saying who it is for, but this line, in my opinion, is the most interesting choice to summarize them all with. It means that this is being told for the people who don’t have the “ideal life” with a perfect family, a good job, and lots of money. The Cleavers were the family in the television series “Leave it to Beaver”, and they basically had it all set. This line makes it  known that this poem is for all of those who don’t have the Cleaver’s lives, but who wish to approach it, telling them that they must shake up their lives and not wait for opportunity to come to them, because it never will. They have to go find it themselves.

My idea of the theme of the poem is pretty much said in its’ title. It means that one must “Shake the Dust” of their lives if they’re not happy where they are. Dust only forms on surfaces that aren’t moving, so why not shake off that dust and progress towards something new, something exciting, something that will actually create a sense of fulfillment that will make life worth something. It also means that one cannot just sit and wait for new opportunities to come to them to change their lives, because one must search them out themselves and discover for themselves what exactly it means to be them. I agree with the statement wholeheartedly, and think that Mojgani makes a great point with this poem. He encourages people to make something of themselves, no matter what cards life has dealt them so far, they can always shuffle the deck.

-Rory O'Loghlin